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25 March 2008 @ 09:55 pm
Last Sunset  
Title: Last Sunset
Fandom: N/A, original
Rating: PG for emo
Summary: A very short two-stanza poem.
AN: This was written on March 16 at 11pm PST.

Last Sunset

The sun at close of day
Burns salty with confusion
Dust of spray and sweet
With the profusion of despair.

It sinks its anchor in
The sky of blacks and golds
And blues by salt-wet cries
Of holds and caged despair.
 
 
Current Location: St. Paul, MN
Current Mood: curiouscurious
 
 
 
dontwanttosaygbdontwanttosaygb on March 28th, 2008 03:49 am (UTC)
Wonderful prose and a summary of our time at the beach. I hope you are doing OK.

Ted
Bloody Jack Flint: Drop It Like It's Plutorhye on March 30th, 2008 04:26 am (UTC)
Thank you! I knew the date would have significance to some people even if it was PDT and not PST silly time change. It was a really... uniquely colored sunset, in that it was yellows, oranges, blues, and blacks.

I'm perfect, thanks for asking. I had a major job interview today and it went like a dream!