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12 March 2009 @ 01:55 pm
The Ruse [Twilight]  
Title: The Ruse
Fandom: Twilight
Summary: Charlie is getting suspicious. Bella is having dreams. Alice is planning a wedding. Takes place after Eclipse. It sort of feels unfinished, and I think it will have to stay that way, because I don't know where it's going, really.
Characters/Pairings: Bella/Edward
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3658

( The Ruse )
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jadbandjadband on March 12th, 2009 09:35 pm (UTC)
I have discovered the Twilight-Books the last week. I have read the books 1, 2 and 3 in 6 days. Today I have bought the last book. I`m addicted. Your little story "The Ruse" is so original for me, I love it. I would also love it, when you would or can continue this. Thank you. Ursel
Bloody Jack Flintrhye on March 13th, 2009 12:20 am (UTC)
Thanks :) I won't be continuing it because I really have no idea what else to write on it. I was keeping it around to finish, but after I hadn't added a word in six months, I decided to let it be free in the world.
Synchestra Duendemysduende on March 13th, 2009 05:34 am (UTC)
Aww, such a pity that you're not going to expand on this. You've got Edward and Bella nailed down perfectly (as always.) I would totally love to see how much further you got with the whole Charlie catching on bit. I love how protective you have Edward and how mischievous Alice is. It's almost like coming home to the books (pre Breaking Fail.) I stopped reading Twi fanfic for quite some time now as it's gone completely absurb with all the 'All Human' or out-of-character Bellward scenarios that resemble very little of the essence of the characters/books. Anyhow, while you seem completely apathetic to writing Twilight stuff, I would just like to say that I for one would LOVE to see more of this - or any other Twilight scenerio idea you might have in the future. :)