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24 September 2007 @ 07:08 pm
Words Defy  
Title: Words Defy
Fandom: BBM
Rating: G
Summary: Short poem!

Words Defy
All this time
   Words defy
Crystal sun
   Sinking sky
Spirit note
   Modal spring
Weather cold
   Water, bring
Rushing wave
   Bitter wind
Sing my dance
   Dance my sin
Sinking moon
   Sweetened sky
Cold to soft
   Flight to die.
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very much aliveiamsupernova on September 25th, 2007 12:36 am (UTC)
How I Met Your Mother is SO awesome.

Damn, I wish I could still write.
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:32 am (UTC)
I like it, but not as much as Big Bang Theory!
Sienatasienata on September 25th, 2007 12:47 am (UTC)
Wow...that was beautiful, and it kept getting better and better.. my favorite lines:

Sing my dance
Dance my sin

Cold to soft
Flight to die.

awesome... S!
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:33 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
lolitaraylolitaray on September 25th, 2007 03:20 am (UTC)
Gorgeous. I love your poetry. :)
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:34 am (UTC)
sweetjesweetje on September 25th, 2007 08:08 am (UTC)
I'm usually not a poetry person. I certainly can't write poety, but this was a beautiful piece. I like it. : )
Debra
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:44 am (UTC)
Thank you! I believe that everyone is secretly a poetry person, they just haven't found their style yet ;)
testa_duratesta_dura on September 25th, 2007 02:14 pm (UTC)
That was hauting.

Especially:

Sinking moon
Sweetened sky
Cold to soft
Flight to die.

Unforgettable.

Tes
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:57 am (UTC)
Oh wow, thanks!
linna_swe on September 25th, 2007 03:31 pm (UTC)
Beautiful!

Thanks for sharing
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:58 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
wintertideaileb42 on September 26th, 2007 04:23 am (UTC)
26th-Sep-2007 02:54 am (UTC)

aileb42
I really liked this a lot. I think it is wonderful to use so few words to say so much. Thanks, M.
Bloody Jack Flint: JackxEnnis Hushrhye on September 26th, 2007 04:59 am (UTC)
Thank you for the lovely comment!